The Doctors Choice (Hand to Whoof)

Hey guys, AdmiralCubie here with a previously unreleased fanfiction!
Technically this goes under the read/watch/listen page in the "by Club Members" section but I really need help and advice. As this was previously un-released I don't have a better link to post.

Also, for those of you currently writing who need advice and stuff, feel free to email me a link at admiralcubie@yahoo.com and I'll give it a post like this so that you can get feedback.

Anyway, links after the break.